My blog buddy advertisement project feedback

 Today class we are doing a presentation about the final advertisement that we created. Today I am going to give feedback to my blog buddy Joanna about her advert.

Feedback question and answer:

• Are the initial ideas and development clear?

I think her initial idea and development is clearly understand.

• Was the research completed and was it clearly linked to the advert?

She didn't do any research about her final advert so there is no linked related to her work.

• Was the process shown with commentary about tools?

Her process are show really well, she explain all her process very detail, well explaining and understandable.

• Was the final outcome clear?  Could there be any improvements?

The final outcome of her work is great but I think she should improved more on massage to target the audience.